Tuesday, July 26, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Here we are back again for another magical SIX! In case you're just tuning in, that's code for a weekly six sentence excerpt from my latest manuscript posted each week, to hopefully tempt you into wanting to read more. Much more.

In light of my romantic mood left over from my recent 14th year wedding anniversary, here is yet another kissy scene...well technically it's more of a pre-kiss scene, between Lorelei and Adrius from my YA manuscript Fire and Ice. She's curious about the spark she gets everytime they touch.

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“So, if I were to, say... lean in and kiss you—”
“You want to kiss me?” His eyes lit with wicked amusement.
“Hypothetically speaking.” I countered , my pulse accelerating.
“Alright.” He said as his mouth twitched into a faint smirk, “Well, hypothetically it would be like a mild electric shock— not strong enough to stop your heart, but, you would definitely feel it."

4 comments:

  1. Great interaction, love how this scene comes alive with their banter and his expressions.

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  2. Fantastic! I love their stand-offish playfulness. I want to meet him! Thank you.

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  3. The electric shock part is intriguing. I like their banter, too.

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  4. Love the banter, plus it gives us a glimpse of the story. Great 6!

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