Wow, how time flies! Here we are already for another Six Scintillating Sentences. As I edit my manuscript, I come across a different set of six each time, hence the lack of continuity from week to week. I just find it fun jumping all over.
This is a heated scene is between Lorelei, who is the main character, and the guy she's likes (a lot) Adrius. Before she know who he really is! It's from my YA fantasy romance FIRE AND ICE.
Once again, I'll paste in a copy of my video trailer (mostly because I just like showing it off ) Hope you enjoy it. And as always I look forward to your comments.
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Swallowing hard I lifted my chin, meeting his gaze head on. “You have no idea what you’re talking about, so just back off.”
“I know what I see,” He goaded.
“Really...and what is that?”
“Someone who’s scared— too frightened of being seen...of being judged, to let herself be the amazing girl she is.”
Great six. I jump all around my manuscript too. Nice trailer as well!
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Kristin Wolfgang
Thanks so much Kristin! Glad I'm not the only one!
ReplyDeleteHope she finds her confidence soon. :-) I jump around in my SSS posts too. Love your blog header!
ReplyDeleteHe's challenging her...hope it works!!
ReplyDeleteSeems like he can see right through her. But will he be able to get past her defences? Intriguing 6. :)
ReplyDeleteTerrific six. Wonderful hero. And I love the video!
ReplyDeleteI like how she faces up to him - good strength.
ReplyDeleteGreat six! I think a lot of us jump around our manuscript. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat six - he sees what she really is.
ReplyDeleteI've been jumping from one write to another I met a guy like that once - she should keep him nice snippet
ReplyDeleteYup, I'm a jumper, too! hehe And fab six, look forward to reading more
ReplyDeleteI love that he sees through her fear and appreciates how amazing she is. Great six.
ReplyDeleteLoved the trailer too. No wonder you're proud of it!
Adrius is a true friend, helping her know herself.
ReplyDeleteLove how he reacts to her. You think he's putting her down but the last part is the real clincher. Shows his caring side
ReplyDeleteOh, he sounds like he really cares about her. Ove the blog banner too.
ReplyDeleteHe's so confident! Gotta' love that :) Nice sentences.
ReplyDeleteNice six and good job with the trailer too!
ReplyDeleteAww he sounds like such a sweetheart!
ReplyDeleteGreat six! I love his directness. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteNothing like a goad to get a fight or scene rolling! Great six!
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